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Out Of The Woods

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A page from a story Im doing for my nieces and nephews 
Image size
2992x4024px 2.39 MB
Make
LGE
Model
Nexus 5X
Shutter Speed
1/60 second
Aperture
F/2.0
Focal Length
5 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Nov 26, 2016, 5:26:04 PM
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Inghelene's avatar

Oh dear me! I’m so sorry for being so late on the feedback!
Overall, I find the image stunning! The church looks great and the amount of detail is immense!
My only critique for the drawing would be that it might be a little isolated in regards to the overall scenery.
For it to be the most detailed part is only natural when it is the point of focus, however, I feel there is a background, the church and then some trees just to fill the foreground. Thus, I would maybe consider having some more trees behind the church or just repeat them slightly to the right, just to get a feeling the two types of landscapes are blending slightly more.
(This is however just my personal opinion, and you yourself choose how you want to approach it.)
What I really do like about the scenery though, would be the immense amount of pointy shapes.
Pointy trees, pointy rocks… Even the clouds have sharp edges and make the moon/sun pointy.
All this goes really well with the sharp edges of the church, and do create a harmony in the image.
So all in all a really neat piece! :D
… And again, my apologies for being so late.. ^^;